Apologies for this delay due to life demands that were frankly impossible to ignore. All the more frustrating to me because this is such a key moment of the story in my eyes. I can say that I have just been given an imperious reason to complete the comic as soon as possible, so I have a lot of incentive not to let such delays happen again. The next page is being colored and shaded and so should be on schedule. Critiques welcome as usual!
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I see just one problem here: in the penultimate panel, one can logically tell that the larger speech bubble belongs to Amer, but visually it looks like it's Malaak's. Maybe you could move its tail to the bottom and lengthen it?
Also, it took me a bit to realise what was happening in the middle panels. I just interpreted it as one static thing at first. In retrospect, I actually like your solution to showing it, so I'm not sure if it's a bug or a feature
I can push the contrast between the inside and outside of the frames, if that's helpful?
That answers my question, thanks